Aww...love the story!

xx
Ali

I know you haven't updated in a while, but can I just say that this is my absolute favourite out of all your stories! I read it all in one sitting and am now in love with Seth.

AAw...really cute story. I am curious as to what career path someone like Seth will take though, so that makes me wonder what he'll study in college. But yes, great story. I love the fact that you don't have those annoying little (A/N) snippits in the middle of your story. Something's up with my luck today, I think, because I keep coming across them...anyway, cheers!

I love all your stories. They are so touching and sad. Your a great writer =)

Love it, now update! Please?!
Peace,
Joker

Like it, love it! :) Great chapter. I feel a bit sorry for Brian. I hope they can sort things out soon - ending in a very platonic relationship.

Melissa's dad overreacted. I hope he comes to his senses soon. I liked her mom's reaction, though. More sensible, and not so "oh my god, not THAT boy!".

Can't wait to read more! :)

hey, i just read your story and so far it is totally awesomely amazing! i am so falling in love with Seth haha, lol your doing an amazing job on this story i can see how hard you worked it totally comes out in your writing! Thanks for writing = )

I like this story. Definitely have an intriguing triangle going on. I'm rooting for Melissa and Seth, but I'm not hating on Brian. That's always a good thing.

you have no idea how much i like this story. I can't explain it in words. lol. But I needed to review this.

I love this story. I really wish you updated it more often!

I'm a huge fan of her difficulties in the "working world" and can't wait to see more Seth/Melissa action.

LOVE this. Please update again asap!

I'm so glad you updated, loved this chapter!
Poor Mike, he has such bad timing and I'm not just refering to his calling hours.
I find it ironic how the times that Melissa and Seth did make out her father was completely oblivious to it and the one time they spend an inocent night watching movies they get caught...can't wait to see what happens next so please update soon!

amazing. the story just rocks so far. wicked shnazzy. but I am stating to feel wicked bad for Brian, you know sinse it seems he likes her alot. Aww, but i don't know who I like better! The whole 'battle' thing tht goes on between Brian and Seth, just makes the whole love triangle thing more apealling. You know what I mean? I hope I'm not rambling...lol. Anyway hope you update soon. The story is really shnazzy!

I think your story is cute and a fun read; only disappointment is the long waits between chapters, but is enjoyable when you do update it. Here's hoping for chapter 12 sooner than later~ :)

Great story so far. Gotta love high school. What's really funny about the whole thing I can actually remember almost everyone, from my experience there, who would fit in place of those that you have written about. Scary. I have also really enjoyed your Beautiful Mistakes, hope you update soon.