I really like your story.

Even though it is a High School theme it has some serious issues that make it more mature than a simple teen love story.

I just wanted to let you know that while I was reading I came accross a chapter (i think it is when Melissa first sits with the AV Guys) where your names got a bit messed up. You wrote Brian and I think you were talking about Kevin.

Anyways, I really like the fact that Melissa actually stood up for herself and kept fighting for what she wanted even though it meant being by herself for a while.

Well, hopefully you'll update soon ;). Thanks for sharing your talent.

hahahha! Oh wow. jump into bed the second they get back together... XD

HAHAHa Love It! XD :D :D :D

Thanks so much for this chapter! :D

YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY Seths back :) love x

your stories...are so real, and they relate truly with life as we know it. Rarely do I have the chance to read writing as fresh as yours. But more importantly, I like reading your writing because they make me think - about my own life. I'm having some issues I need to resolve at the moment, which issues are very different from Melissa's - but in a way, there is a likeness in that its about choices I have to make.

So reading this is totally giving me food for thought.

I hope you continue to write, and I hope to see you published one day :)

take care,

amaryllis

im not just glad, I'm freaking jumping up and down! THANK GOD! they found each other again. I so wanted that. more soon, please

And they're back! *crowd goes wild* lol. I'm so glad they're back together again. I can't wait to see what happensnext!

Aw, yay! I'm so happy right now. Finally, together again. As it should be. ;) I'm glad he admitted why he pushed her away and shared the letter with her. I'm having a hard time believing his mother want to make amends out of the goodness of her heart, I wouldn't be so fast to forgive her either.

I think it's great that Melissa was able to find herself and make her own choices, especially when it came to Brian. She's really showing her strong, independent side and I love seeing it. Plus her speech to Seth was just perfect. If that didn't get through to him I don't know what would, lol. Incredible chapter, I loved it. Well done!

they are together? For real? You usually write unhappy/ but lifting endings and this as of right now is a happy/lifting ending. is what im saying making sense? I don't know, but i loved it! Seth and melissa forever!

The only two things I missed whilst having no Internet on my phone was twitter and your beautifully amazing stories.

Boy am I glad I came back to this chapter. Brian ain't going to like this, almost like she one upped him, obviously unintentional.

April has completely changed but hey Cece is a much better best friend.

I'm rooting for a Kevin and Cece pairing!

Oh I completely love the new Melissa, the backbone has finally made an appearance. She's finally brought her own voice to the story so I look forward to reading it, especially when she tackles the Seth issue with the parents.

1:00 am and my first day at university tomorrow (today?) so I gotta go sleep, sorry for the short review. By the way this story has been added to my quote worthy list; obviously means I find it extremely beautiful, enough to shelf it with all my other favourites.

Love.

That is all.

Emma

after seth's explanations i'm very glad they got back together again!

Wot wot! Their back together I'm so happy you have no idea! :D

and I love Cece and Kevin ;) too cute lol

and o I didn't expect Seth's mum to contact him... That was surprisning

but awesome chapter though! :D

Finally! Thank goodness. )

Melissa is finally growing a backbone :P

And Poor Brian being treated like that, but that's his own fault for pressuring her into dating him.

I want to read more Seth :)

I want to do a little happy jig in appreciation for this chapter.

Yay, Brian and Melissa are having problems.

Melissa is finding her voice.

Seth sounded jealous!

Couldn't love this chapter more.

I always thought Brian loved, now I'm beginning to wonder whether he loves what he can't/doesn't have.

I like Brian, just as the friend.