Holy crap, that was cool! :D (I'm laughing at a horror story, how weird)

But I liked the story! Mi-mama's kinda, sorta crying here. These kinda stories where there's one/two survivors always touch her heart. (shrugs)

Oh yeah... HI!! IT'S JJ. XD

Hey, great story here, but I did see some mistakes here. Like when "breaks" should've been "brakes" and "but t" should've been "but it." Other than that, nothing serious.