awesome story

Thank you so much for the update that was good wish the chapter could have been longer though. That Mitchell is something else its good to see that Will sees himself in him. I hope he comes to Melody's rescue before she gets hurt. ...CANT WAIT UPDATE SOON! :0)
p.s. what girl doesn't love being surrounded by a bunch of football players..lol

can't wait for more

aw this is nice

thank you for the update!!

I really really love this story. Can't wait to see what happens next.

PS, I'm a girl and I was definitely excited to see Dark Knight the first night it came out. Glad to see I'm not the only one. lol

PLEASE CONTINUE WITH THIS STORY ITS GETTING SO JUICY! :)

Your story just keeps getting better. I hope he turns out to be good

This is my first time giving a review, so I just want to make it short and sweet.
I just read your first chapter and couldn't wait to get to the next this seems like its
going to be a very good and sweet story that will leave the readers with a aw. feeling.
Keep up the good work... Now I'm gonna go on to read the next chapters.

P.S. I'm new to this website and unsure of how it works I was looking for interracial romance
Novels that I can purchase and came across this site but all these stories aren't complete. Are
there any that are complete and sellable? Or are these just finishing projects that writers are
doing? If you can give me any feed back I'd appreciate it

There is no such thing as a long chapter! I really like this story, glad I found it. Please update soon!

I'm liking the story so far, and i hope u continue with it. =]

HA!

Poor Mitchell. He has no idea what is going on. And Will, tsk, tsk. Just dump your girlfriend and get with Melody. He is going to make things a lot worse before they get better. I mean, Kate seems so one-dimensional and forgettable, but I don't think she deserves to be strung along like Will is doing. But again, conflict makes a great story so I am going to be excited to see what Will is going to do to get his plan back on track.

And go Mel, keeping up with the cool kids. I would have socked Kate in her face with the way she was acting but I think it is awesome you have her standing her ground.

Oh, the tangled web Will has weaved!

love it! thanks for the chapter!

heii loven your story
its really going well
i hate mitch seriously get away from her
WILL 4 LIFE +
please write another one soon

Lukes Fat xx

Wow, I hate the fact that Mitchell notices her NOW, when Will shows a slight interest (if they're best friends, Mitchell has to know that Will's interested.)
I really like the way that Will was pampering himself so that he'll look good for Melody, it's really cute!
I really hope that Will and Mitchell's relationship doesn't suffer b/c they're both chasing after the same girl, that kinda of drama is never too good for the beginnings of a relationship.
I love how this is going, it's really great and keeps me interested.