Wow, I hate the fact that Mitchell notices her NOW, when Will shows a slight interest (if they're best friends, Mitchell has to know that Will's interested.)

I really like the way that Will was pampering himself so that he'll look good for Melody, it's really cute!

I really hope that Will and Mitchell's relationship doesn't suffer b/c they're both chasing after the same girl, that kinda of drama is never too good for the beginnings of a relationship.

I love how this is going, it's really great and keeps me interested.

OMG... I loved this chapter. It was great.

AH! IM HOOKED! please please update again soon cause that was amazing! :D

HaTeFuL LoViNg

not bad...not bad at all. :-)

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will is pissed, haha. and who watches beverly hills chihuahua

heck dark knight is better. great fims. rip leger.

anyway fab chapter, espeacially the part we got to learn will's true intetions also his relationship with mitchell and kate.

hooray he does nt like her.

cant wait for the next chapter

I swear to god if you don't update ASAP I will, well I'm not sure what I'll do but I'll think of something! So update! OR ELSE!

Joker

Great update. Thanks

LOL. So Melody does like a jock. I knew her weakness would show. And I bet I can see how this is going to go. Mel will hang out with Will and get to know Mitchell, for a hot minute it will be the Melody and Mitchell Show (that sounds so cute) and then Will will get jealous. At least that is how I see it, lol.

I can't wait to see where this goes. More, more, MORE please!

I love the way this story is being written. It great that she has another interest in Mitchell. I can't to you update this story again.

You HAVE to update! You can't take that long to update! I'm very impatient and I can't wait that long for another chapter of an amazing story!

Peace out,

Joker

wow so does crystal know mel has a crush on mitchel not will? well duh they are best friends. wow i wonder how will is doing to react? heheheheeh. hes going to be hurt. i am hooked gal. bring it, cant wait for the next chapter. i loved the chapter bcz you get to see crystal and mel's relationship and learn melody's personality. keep going.

later

xoxo

I don't know, I don't really like Mitchell or Will. LMAO!

and the plot thickens...i just read the whole story in one sitting,its awesome!i also love interracial stories myself and i just gotta say, update real soon!

Interesting. The next chapter is gonna be interesting. I wonder if his friends will openly accept Melody (an obviously awkward outsider) into their group, especially his girl.

If she's smart, she would be suspicious of the way Will acts towards Melody. I wonder what Mitchell thinks of Melody. I can't wait for the next update!

lolz this is so funny! aand really good, please update soon!