She seems to be a bit timid...can she ahndle some one like him? He isn't very mice to the girls that he dates...it probably doesn't help that girls are always thrwoing themselves at him either. Thanks

This is such a cute story...I was LOL when he knocked her down. Thanks

Luvv it!Write more please!

I really like how this is beginning. I see tons of potential between these characters. This set-up for the story is classic. Bad boy who just HAS to know the good girl. I think there should be a couple of twists along the way, maybe some interesting facts or traits the characters possess or some off kilter secret one may have, just to keep things interesting. I just love surprises.

But I think this story could be really cute and also really angsty. I am sure you have a plan in mind and I can't wait to see it.

Good luck!

UPDATE! Like, NOW!

Peace out,

Joker

Yea, I'm really worried about Melody, but I am glad that Will immediately told her that he had a gf, even though, she probably already knew. It shows that he has SOME character.

I liked this chapter, can't wait for what's next!

Good chapter. Will reminds me of my character Jagger. Thanks for reviwing my story. :-)

This is was good. I can't wait to read the next chapter

great chapter, i so dont like will i hope hes not looking at mel as another victim. hes an idiot. i love the story so far, its developing quite well. cant wait for the next chapter.

That was great, really like the beginning and can't wait to see what happens next. I laughed when she shrugged in response to her name...cute.

This is interesting, I would love to read more!

I'm interested.

I like it so far, sounds like a great start

I like it so far. Please keep it going.

I really like it so far...I'm a sucker for the stories with popular guy in love with the not so popular girl! Please update frequently!