Perhaps one of the best lines I have read in a very long time:

"Pulling my Jericho down not with trumpets
But with silence"

Very well done line. As for the whole poem, I just felt something was missing but it was still well formed and a good read.

As my wants are scooped out
Spilling over my walls
im not sure this translated well, or that the word "scoop" had a place in this,
but i did like it, and hope it gets many reviews.
i also enjoyed the unconventional ending :)


-sv

! I like it-the fact that you say you don't think it's your best makes me want to go read more of your stuff xD.
Keep it up.
-pammy-.