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| imjustme213 2008-10-12 ch 1,   | That was a beautiful poem. I like the change of setting, but how you still kept focus. The way your portrayed this person and the details not directly about them, but still having to do with them is wonderful. |
| East-0f-Eden 2008-09-16 ch 1, | I actually think this was very romantic. With Gershwin and all of that, walking down the streets. (ok I'm weird) But if I was in the 3rd grade and you were. I would have hated you. :) |
| Tytherpol 2008-09-16 ch 1, | oh man the last eleven lines are fucking stellar :) i think all yer poems have some durden in them very very cool |