This is beautiful and very songlike.

Really beautiful and sweet, I like it.

I love this.

Happy Birthday!

And keep on writing

"If to say goodbye is difficult,

don't say it and just turn your back

and walk away without looking back,

maybe, someday..

We'll meet each other."

Love that part. Nice job once again. (:

Unknown Survivor

"I want to be like the last leaf/that falls at your feet," 'tis truly beautiful! I loved this piece! It was obviously well thought out. ANd the imagery is great! I love it! Well done )

This is really good. The first paragraph really caught my attention. Especially the first few lines. Keep writing!

Have a happy birthday on friday :)

it's a very pretty poem.

Actually this poem had me smiling; it was lovely. I like the repetition, too.

PS: Happy Birthday friday!

First thing's first... Happy Birthday!

Secondly, this was beautiful. I like how everything connected to the sky and trees. :)

Again... happy birthday! Chat later. -Qzie