 ThePixess 2008-11-29 . chapter 1I like that this is so vauge; everybody freaks out about *something*, and I think your decision not to label just what that something is makes the whole piece work better. Plus that whole idea of anxiety eating a person up inside is conveyed so well here. I love it. |
 smellgoody 2008-11-01 . chapter 1this is SO god!! made me sad. |
 BlackxXxRose 2008-09-17 . chapter 1Amazing piece of work, darling. The tone was so desperate and frustrated, I love it! It reminds me of my struggle to stop cutting. |
 WeAreBroken 2008-09-17 . chapter 1I like the beginging more than the end.
I Love the word itch to label a habit, i've used that too.
you know they say if you scatch it'll spread... |
 vitriolicvertigo 2008-09-17 . chapter 1I really like how your poems convey emotion.
I never would've understood that kind of problem without poems like this.
And plus, they flow well, are immensely entertaining, and give amazing visuals. |
 gg. lass 2008-09-17 . chapter 1this is really interesting.
it has a desperate tone to it.
i like it.
nice job.
yours until the wind changes,
gg |