i like how you asked the rhetorical questions..

i feel like i can relate to this

:(

This poem is so sad. I hope that it isn't something that you have problems with...but i'm guessing you do.

-Amy

When I started reading this, I thought it was just alright, and it was kind of a typical love poem, but then I realized it was actually a family poem. This is really sad, but I like the repitition of "If only once," then how it changes with the last three lines. Nice job, this poem is really great.

Oh too beautiful! Seriously, it has an absolutely angelic feel. Some of the lines seem pretty cliche, but I love the way it turns. Beautiful

Love

Dia