this is quite different. in a good way though =] i like the format and the way that it never changes, yet it's different every time. and the words that you use make the reader wonder what is really going on.

the last stanza seems so much different than the others as well. i'm not sure if this is good or bad, but it just kinda shocks you that after all the other things this person has put the other one through, they say that they'll always be there for them...

anyways, i like it =] good job