The storyline has potential. I'm very interested to see how the story will progress between the two characters. I already like the girl protagonist. My only complaint so far is that the chapters are short, but style-wise the length of the chapters works fine. I'm anxious to see what the next chapter is about, so update quickly?

The first chapter is extravagant... the ideas flowed from one side to the other just like an ordinary mind with a lot of issues.

The second one's nice. It bubbles out the bright and dark side of this 'power' of his. This clearly justifies the line: 'great power comes with great responsibility...' because if you're not responsible enough with this kind of 'power' you'll definitely go in an asylum.

-kamiruchan10-