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Reviews For: Touch The Sky
CorvaCarolina 2009-01-28 . chapter 2
Not a bad start, but your story could use more descriptions of the characters and you should put a blank line between each line of dialogue to make it easier to read.
Agony 2008-09-18 . chapter 1
Good story!
under the influence 2008-09-18 . chapter 1
not a bad star...though it felt rushed in some places...
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