i'm soo fuckin' close to beatinq
the crap outta Laurence. : /
hes sucha jerkk to Ashley. >:(
i LOVE LOVE LOVE Bo.! : D
hes perfect for Ashley even thouqh
hes 12 years younqer.!

GAH SEQUEL SEQUEL can't wait to read it!
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I'm gonna go cry in a corner... I personally think it's a bit wrong but it's obivous that they really care about eachother. and people who love eachother should always be together. it's just too heartbreaking any other way!!

HOLY!
I'm not sure I want to click that little arrow now...
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i'm scared to see what happens!!

Gah I'm not meaning to steal!!
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I'm sorry!

I'm kinda worried about the whole thing with Bo.
I mean doesn't that mean he's just as bad?
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Laurence is a bastard!
Oh my god!
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He makes me upset. How could someone do that to ashley. If I were him I'd totally SMASH that stupid lexus.
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Gosh I'm so excited to see what happens with Bo though!
The anguish is killing me. I'm gonna click the next chapter now!

Gah I hate Evelyn, yet i can't help but feel somewhere dep down she actually is looking out for Ashley. Even if it's in a rude way.
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Sorry I don't review all your chapters. If I did I'd run out of things to say, then it would be a drag to read.
I'd be all "so cute" or "so sad" for every review. That's why I'm only going to review you every now and then.
Sorry~!

talk about startng things of with a bang! ha ha. What a way to grab our attention. This story looks full of interesing things so i can't wait to read more! great work so far!

This story was just so amazing. It felt so genuine, and the ending was pretty realistic and not cheesy at all. I expected something like it though; you didn't seem like a writer who just slapped on a happy ending just because. I'm really glad there's gonna be a sequel though because it really can't end like that. I'll admit I was really hesitant at first because of the age difference, but I really did enjoy reading this story. I can't wait to read the sequel.

Sad ending but a really good story! Like I said many times before I really enjoyed this one! I'm glad there's a sequel. It makes this ending 100 times less depressing. :P -FG

Ah, the long awaited interruption. I want Lizzy to understand, but from her perspective...walking into my boys room having him cuddled naked with an older man who you always say as the boys uncle? Eh...I'd get it eventually, but on first sight shit would hit the fan. -FG

This could very well be a midlife crisis. I just realized this. I'm not exactly an ageist but when you get titles like 'ex-lovers-nephew' things get complicated. Of course this is what I wanted like a good slash loving fan, but the brain is catching up and I'm dropping from my earlier high. Now I'm thinking realistically, and so far not good.

Although Seattle DOES have quite a few number of great art schools. ;) I hope, if nothing else, that Lizzy would be okay with this relationship. She's a cool mom. -FG

*fans self* Well then. That was...intense. I'm a lemon hater, I skip over them, but I never condone them for being written into the story. But this, THIS! WOW! Loved it! It was so RAW and REAL, and kinda funny when Ash kept telling Bo to pull out, but then pull back in. ;)

I'm sure the aftermath will be hell on wheels, but its nice for now. Guess I'll be feeling sorry for Bo next thing. Le sigh, but such brilliance. I'll have to fav this I think...-FG

Poor Ash. Well, I'm sure things will get worse before they get better.

I think the biggest shame in all this is Laurence and Audrey actually seem like they'd end up together! I want Laurence to get his and be miserable. Not be happy! I dont really know Audrey's story so I cant really agree or disagree with what she's doing.

And Bo's definitely got the man part down in the Southern gent, I can say that much. :P Hadnt expected the jacking off, but it fit. I think. Yes, it did. ...:D

While there are a few spelling mistakes, I actually REALLY like this story! o_o. A lot. Its probably all the characters. Laurence is a perfect asshole who doesnt really love his partner, Ashley is kind, loving (too much so it seems), and Bo's a Southern gentlemen. That must be what it is. Bo's character. Ever date one of them? Absolute dolls, they treasure the person they're with. I even had my chance at one but in the end I couldnt do the farm thing (yes, he actually owned a farm), and he couldn't do the city thing. We're still good friends.

Anyway, so I guess I can relate to the story in that sense. That, and I've been raised in Seattle. XD The story might not take place there anymore, but its always nice to see people dropping my little big city. A lot of people dont even know where Seattle IS! >_<

Love what you have so far. I can tell this is going to be one of those nights that I dont sleep so I can stay up and read fictionpress works! -FG