Writing Dynamo-aka TDoolan-I am Blackstone (different spelling, long story) from the Bolan boards.

These chapters were nicely written. The action was well paced, clear and easy to follow and the consortium of villains is interesting-especially Salazar, who seems like a good Bolan counterpart.

It does contain some of the things I like less from a lot of Bolan books-the inevitable Muslim terrorist and Bolan being an operative instead of going off on nmore personal missions-but those are not criticisms as much as my own pet peeves. These chapters are well written, action packed and fast moving.

Good work.