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Reviews For: TLotHD, Chapter 1: Dragon's Lair
The Trench Coat Guild 2008-11-04 . chapter 2
HIGHLARIOUS
great work
congrads
but you may want to work out Niska's motives a bit more. why does she want to know about the dragons? is there an adventure in the book? what makes her determined to complete it? That sort ofting
Xela Elyod 2008-09-20 . chapter 1
Nice prologue. I alway liked dragons.
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