You're an awesome poet, I wish I could give a more useful review than this but I can't think of a single way you could improve your work.

Lady Saphira

I like the way this is written. The lines balance out, and the light, confused tone sets a mood that is appropriate to the subject. The only real issue is that, while most of it flows very nicely, in some places it's rather chopped up. Nothing serious, you just forgot an 's' in line 11 and the last two lines read as if they're missing a word. Other than that, it sounds good.

-Ghost