Odd change in format there, but on to more important matters. The story itself is very good. However, I think the the struggle of her wanting to become a female racer almost skimmed over, as though you just wanted to go through the conflict to the point of the story. Use more sensory details. Sight, touch, taste, smell and sound are your friends.

Other than that it shows a hell of a lot of promise. Take some creative writing classes in high school and above, never give up and I'll be in the crowd at your first book signing.

Personally, I don't care for the format. It's too distracting and overall too short. That being said the writing itself is very good and makes the reader perk up eyes with interest.

Very good story!
Your way of writing is very different and interesting; its structure has a unique way of explaining what you're conveying.
I like the vibe so keep up the good work!

Trinity

Daphne isn’t anyway derived from Dagne, a character in a book is it? It does rather sound like her.