Returning the favor...

Do you promise it won't hurt anymore? Please?

This is very pretty. I've heard stories bout this stuff before, and this sums it up quite well.

You might like some of my more depressing stuff; what you read was slightly happier than my usual.

touching

sad but good

Beautiful. It almost makes me see why Christians believe all that. _

Um.. that's depressing. *blinks* very depressing. I like it.

This is really sweet, i really like it!

The innocence that is inside all of us at some point in our lives in here.

This is a beautiful piece, I really like it.

Wow, that is sad and beautiful all at once.

Wow! I love your poems! I'm gonna try to review every one!

*awwed* is this from personal experience? i like the way u make it sound like a child is speaking. it gives it a sence of innocence.

O my gosh, that was so good and sad! Really good!

how sad is that? that was a really sad! you also have a lot of talent, as well as a way with words. :) :)

I liked it. It's dark, depressing, my kind of poem. Do I detect a touch of black humor?