|Reviews for jack in the box|
| shadow-of-a-trackless-sea 10/11/08 . chapter 1
loved it, so much imagery i think that this piece would make our eglish teacher proud *haha vocab sentences*
| simpleplan13 10/6/08 . chapter 1
I like the way the story flows, but still each stanza is really kinda different. Also like your word choice of atrophy, that was great. I also liked your descriptions, especially "sunset bleeds through the grass"
| Stella Grimshaw 9/28/08 . chapter 1
Odd piece. I liked it though, the idea of the jack in the box. Good work.
| loversdream17 9/24/08 . chapter 1
very well done rhyme is very good and rythhim is very well kep and the edescription is great too. Good job.
| Militant Poet 9/23/08 . chapter 1
hm, very interesting indeed...i like the idea of fame and wealth as a poorly played game