God how i wish i could write desend ...all my storys SUCK =,(

Very intense...
Sad and angry
It's as if she's reluctant but has no other choice...

it sounded powerless, even so it's a heartfelt poem.

Wow. I'm amazed, Poe-chan!! :D

I especially liked these lines:

"My eyes will burn and tears will spill
You'll turn green as if ill"

I could just SEE that. Which, of course, is a good thing. :)

I LOVE THIS. ITS GONNA GO ON MY FAVORITES!! Whee~

~Pochi.

P.S. You deserve a round of applause. -claps-