Yes, it is indeed a horrible story.

creepyish cool.

but hey i like it. ;D

I found it interesting. Kind of exhilarating, in it's own creepy kinda way. I've never heard suicide described like that. Nice job.

OMG CRISS YOU SCARE ME! FREAKK! jkjk :P It's a really interesting yet depressing poem. So... dramatic. It's quite scary, actually, the idea of suicide. Anyho.. GR8 JOB!

This had a cool feel to it. I don't know how exactly to explain it...like someone being interviewed as they're killing themself, sort of. I'm not sure how else to describe but as interesting. Sorry for my pathetic vocabulary, but anyway, great job.