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| lyra-cle 2008-10-20 ch 1, | ^_^ I like very much. I like the tension between the two, and in the room; it's very near palpable. I also really like the names you've come up with; I always love good fantasy names...but can never come up with my own that don't sound ridiculous. I look forward to reading more! |
| SuperTurtle 2008-09-22 ch 1, | It was okay. The description was really good. I got a little confused in some parts but i think i got it all worked out now. |
| Twitdit 2008-09-22 ch 1, | oh my GAWD!! i am SO TOTALLY hooked on this story! PLEASE don't leave this unfinshed!! It was FANTASTIC! I can't wait to read the next chapter! :) |