|Reviews for In Memoriam|
| simpleplan13 10/8/08 . chapter 1
I like this, especially the part about the lips, that was really powerful. Nice job.
| May Elizabeth 10/7/08 . chapter 1
| Dormio 9/24/08 . chapter 1
Very beautiful and also very sad.
I loved this part:
I want to think you're a real prince
from the stories I wrote and you never read.
ps. Thanks for your review :)
| The Reverse Edge Blade 9/22/08 . chapter 1
I liked this! It was a little hard to read because of the setup, but your theme was so good! I really liked how you wrote the feelings through the poem! I liked that it wasn't too repeating in words. Often long poems get like that, but you managed this well! Keep at it!
The Reverse Edge Blade
| Unknown Survivor 9/22/08 . chapter 1
Wow. o.o That was a very well written piece. Great job. I'd pick a favorite part but I liked the whole thing so I won't bother reposting your whole poem in my review. (lol)
| Isca 9/22/08 . chapter 1
"I don't want wings to fly anymore." What a great opening line!
"I don't want to change the world." You can definitely feel the sense of hopelessness here.
WOW. The idea of someone's sob 'raping' you was incredible! I really connected with that line.
"The important things are never remembered." Well, isn't that the truth! Just think of all the people in history that we don't know about; all of the wonderful life experiences and stories that are lost in time.
This piece was excellent! :D
| Time To Change 9/22/08 . chapter 1