I like this, especially the part about the lips, that was really powerful. Nice job.

Beautiful. Peace.

Very beautiful and also very sad.

I loved this part:

I want to think you're a real prince

from the stories I wrote and you never read.

ps. Thanks for your review :)

I liked this! It was a little hard to read because of the setup, but your theme was so good! I really liked how you wrote the feelings through the poem! I liked that it wasn't too repeating in words. Often long poems get like that, but you managed this well! Keep at it!

The Reverse Edge Blade

Wow. o.o That was a very well written piece. Great job. I'd pick a favorite part but I liked the whole thing so I won't bother reposting your whole poem in my review. (lol)

Unknown Survivor

"I don't want wings to fly anymore." What a great opening line!

"I don't want to change the world." You can definitely feel the sense of hopelessness here.

WOW. The idea of someone's sob 'raping' you was incredible! I really connected with that line.

"The important things are never remembered." Well, isn't that the truth! Just think of all the people in history that we don't know about; all of the wonderful life experiences and stories that are lost in time.

This piece was excellent! :D

Isca

just. wow.