This is different. Then again, I just keep comparing it to your earlier stuff. I love this, though. Very nice.

konnichi wa

I like the second one, the: "would you read between the lines." I think, though, that it would work better if instead of italicizing the word "lies," you bolded it. That makes it much easier to see.

Ha det

-Shan-

wow, very cool indeed.

Just realized that you've updated this one. I like the new chapters. Esp the line, "I know it's never really over" and the line before that... don't remember the exact words. The bad day was really bad, huh?

I like these thoughts.

they're interesting.

Aww. This is sweet. Fluffy. Love the last line.

Woah. This is happy xD The second line is amazing, I really felt the emotions in that one. Third one as well. Last line is genius. Brilliantly done! D

My hands are always cold, so my best friend teases me with that line, "Cold hands, warm heart" all the time xD

Anyway, I really like this. It's different. )

I don't really understand it... Love the first line though.

wow. the words are soo powerful.

Narq.

"And she doesn’t deserve me."

“I know I’m on a losing streak”

Those two lines really stood out to me for some reason. Nice job. (:

Unknown Survivor

I like the line 2:

And when are you going to listen?

this poem is short but it's got strong emotions btw.