 eclipsedflame 2008-12-11 . chapter 5Wow!, this was great! I loved the fight part and it was a great story. Is this the ending? |
 Sonya Elizabeth 2008-11-11 . chapter 5*sob* ALENA'S DEAD! No fair. Stupid Drew! Why did HE have to win?! |
 Sonya Elizabeth 2008-10-08 . chapter 4EK WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?!?! ... well i know what happens next but i still want it on this website! =P hehe |
 Aleksy The Flying Onion 2008-09-24 . chapter 2Ah! That's was my favorite chapter so far. That's such a neat concept! About the black flame and everything, I mean. I'm glad he escaped. Update soon! |
 Aleksy The Flying Onion 2008-09-24 . chapter 1Jeese. That's quite a thing to be told! |
 Sonya Elizabeth 2008-09-22 . chapter 1*shudder* oh! awesomeness! |