 dreamsinger95 2009-11-25 . chapter 14 Hey
I absolutely LOVE all your stories. I think this was great, you have a real gift and i am really happy to know that you've gotten a book published, your writing is great!
I thought this ending was a little anti-climactic though.
Sincerely
DreamSinger95 |
 Wierd out Loud 2009-10-11 . chapter 14darn you! darn you hell! why must you make this story so good... now I have to go and be sad because it's over and then watch 5 seasons of deadliest catch. I hope you're happy.
- Matt from B.C |
 three 2009-08-10 . chapter 14 You are awesome!! Loved this story too! Thank you :-). |
 little miss tiny 2009-07-17 . chapter 14 Ah, loved the story. Not to mention you update quite regularly.
Will miss the story now that it is done. D: The father and daughter relationship was...authentic and beautiful :>
Any sequel? *wistful glance*
Anyway, GREAT JOB! :D |
 terriblychaotic 2009-06-28 . chapter 8haha this reminds me of deadliest catch! :) |
 Thalia Cross 2009-06-11 . chapter 14I just read this entire story in one sitting, and it was AWESOME! Hehe...I absolutely loved it, and the ending was just perfect. This story would make a great movie. This is so going on my favorites list. |
 chng234 2009-06-11 . chapter 14the ending is quite abrupt. but i m glad that both daughter n father made up in the end |
 bec1246 2009-06-10 . chapter 14is this the end...
NOT COOL...we need some closure
think sarah dessen |
 bec1246 2009-06-10 . chapter 6the fact that she had to sell her horse really killed me :( great so far! |
 Pretend Jane 2009-06-10 . chapter 14LoL. Of course the story had to end with her doing something crazy. That's exactly how the story began, so it would be strange if it ended any other way. Although I kind of wish she had more moments with Cole without her dad interrupting. Though I guess this story wasn't a romance, so I guess that's understandable. I totally wish for a sequel! |
 Pretend Jane 2009-06-10 . chapter 12I couldn't help but think it was weird he confused his teenage daughter with her mom...and because his wife cheats he only talks to his daughther minimally? He shouldn't have made his daughter pay for her mother's mistakes. |
 Pretend Jane 2009-06-10 . chapter 10I love this story. I love your main character. She is one tough and fun loving chick. I like how she can hang with the guys. She's one of those girls who can prove guys wrong because she isn't all what she appears. It seems she's getting Cole's interest. Gotta love it. I'm glad I decided to read this when you had finished it. I hate waiting for chaps. Anyway, good story. |
 Samuel Harrisson 2009-06-10 . chapter 14Wow. That was a fantastic ending. I congratulate you. Although this story had times where it could have been cliche, it never dipped to that level. It was a wonderful story. I greatly enjoyed it. Good job! |
 vizzini 2009-06-04 . chapter 13 I wasn't terribly sure I'd like this, but I'm pleasantly surprised to find it has an engaging plot and likable characters. Even the moral issues in it are well placed and well portrayed. Hurrah! Will be waiting for updates on this one.
Only one small thing to note; sometimes the italics are abused in places, so watch out for isolated over-usage of italics. Otherwise, kudos. |
 chng234 2009-06-03 . chapter 12i feel so sad for crista's dad... but even if his wife is having an affair... he shld not have left her "alone" for 4 years... |