Oh, hell. You make my heart hurt. This is pretty. Well done. I liked Dan. I kind of liked Suzy, honestly. I liked the narrator a lot. Good job

I think that's the first and last reaction someone has in the event of a suicide. The 'guilt reaction' that is, I think it's something we think will never happen, but in the end, maybe it was our fault. I don't believe that everything happens for a reason, but I do believe that something is always caused by another, call it progressing, or Newton's third law, or whatever. Well, shit I didn't mean to make this review so long! I loved it, honestly, I liked the description at the end. "brain matter"... that made my inner freak giggle!

I was always honest, except for when I wasn’t. A perfect opening line. You know this story has 6 words, which makes it creepy on top of being tragic.

~SirScott

Wow. Cool. Short. Yeah, I liked it.

How tragic. I suppose that's why it's a tragedy, then... It's written very well. Good job...

- Des