Wow...
I can sorta understand your parents' feelings now.
All your fictionpress work are so depressing! And here I thought you were a happy-go-lucky type of person!
But anyway,
Both your poems are fantabulous.
Short yet detailed.
Great philosophy on life.
This poem is so scary...
yet so beautiful.

keep updating!!
sorry I commented on love and rivalry b4 I saw who was the author!
Update soon!
xx
SP (my awesome initials for StrawberryPop. too cool ;))

I like this poem, it was very simple but that made it all the more captivating. It's something we can all relate to, and I guess that's the point.

"And you take a marker and scrawl ugly messages on your walls.

Life sucks; you’re angry.

And nothing can change that fact."

this reminds me of soemthing i did rather recently. just kind of made me pause. and then i think i found a lot of what i'm going through in your poem. its interesting. i like the breaks

-eve