ee they met YAY! update when possible and Happy Halloween.

Ugh, why can't every guy be like Nathan? He's hot, he's got money, and he wants to protect everyone (well, at least once he gets to know them).

This chapter was amazing. I enjoyed reading it and there was really nothing bad about it, except that it feels a bit rushed. The whole story kind of seems rushed, but that's okay. It's not necessarily a bad thing.

Just keep up the awesome work...

I love the story and can't wait for the next chapter. My only question is are we ever going to see Nathan's side? What he thought when they were young? What he thinks now, both about Rainie and/or about how he feels about his sister's relationship with her? You mentioned him being suspicious but he didn't really seem suspicious. If anything he seemed eager to meet Rainie and disappointed that he didn't get the chance to. Also did he put to and to together that the girl he saw leaving who looked familiar and Rainie are one and the same?


Is there a reason or story as to why he is suspicious of everyone and Lisa's comment that not everyone was after their money?

did you gt rainie, eun hae, and ji hoon from the celebrities' names??

I'm enjoying your story - looking forward to when Rainie and Nathan finally meet.

i like it so far. it's good. update when possible. :)

Very nice! I especially liked the prologue, it captured the anxiety and emotion perfectly! :)

Will be keenly awaiting more updates in the future.

-Elle
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Great story. :D

this is gonna be so awesome

A new story. How nice. I assume we'll be waiting longer on the other two you have...well the other two that I read.

Anyway, Rainie Lin makes me think of that Taiwanese actress Rainie Yang. I like the story so far, but you still have to watch your grammar. I can't wait to find out the reason that Nathan and Lisa left without saying anything. Also, I think that the scene where we met Rainie was a tad rushed a bit confusing.
"“Get me a cup of coffee!”
“Run this to boss for me!”
“NO RUNNING HERE!”
“Get me paper clips!”
“What’s taking so long for a cup of coffee?!”"

At first I thought that the designer she had made those copies for said the first line "Get me a cup of coffee". And get rid of the "here" in "No running here"; it's not needed.

I like how the story is going though and I can't wait to read more.