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ode to melancholy
2008-11-18
ch 1,
I haven't done it since May but I think about it every day.
smellgoody
2008-11-01
ch 1,
WHOA!! Melissa!! that's all i can say! i almost cried. so good!!

You know who i am buddy.
forever screaming
2008-09-24
ch 1,
wow i can SO relate to this! its so honest and the words flow very nicely. i think theres always going to be some temptation cuz i haven't done it for almost a year but it still crosses my mind when i get really upset...good job & stay strong!
anyways, this is a great poem! keep writing
Kiss.Today.Goodbye
2008-09-23
ch 1,
very raw but in a controlled and well-structured way.

The temptation stays forever, as far as I can tell. But eventually, it's not always the first thought and it gets easier to resist.
Artemis Anderson
2008-09-23
ch 1,
Very well done. And good job on not having done so in so many months. Keep it up. I know it's difficult.
acidxrainbows
2008-09-23
ch 1,
You have said what I want to say but somehow have never been able to quite so eloquently. This poem is honest, raw, relateable, and most of all...delicious (:
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