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| ode to melancholy 2008-11-18 ch 1, | I haven't done it since May but I think about it every day. |
| smellgoody 2008-11-01 ch 1, | WHOA!! Melissa!! that's all i can say! i almost cried. so good!! You know who i am buddy. |
| forever screaming 2008-09-24 ch 1, | wow i can SO relate to this! its so honest and the words flow very nicely. i think theres always going to be some temptation cuz i haven't done it for almost a year but it still crosses my mind when i get really upset...good job & stay strong! anyways, this is a great poem! keep writing |
| Kiss.Today.Goodbye 2008-09-23 ch 1, | very raw but in a controlled and well-structured way. The temptation stays forever, as far as I can tell. But eventually, it's not always the first thought and it gets easier to resist. |
| Artemis Anderson 2008-09-23 ch 1, | Very well done. And good job on not having done so in so many months. Keep it up. I know it's difficult. |
| acidxrainbows 2008-09-23 ch 1, | You have said what I want to say but somehow have never been able to quite so eloquently. This poem is honest, raw, relateable, and most of all...delicious (: |