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Reviews For: Beautifully Cruel
NyghtRayne 2009-06-14 . chapter 1
Oh My Bejesus! This is freaking amazing! Where did you come up with this?! My slahes end up seeming stupid to me...and rushed but wow...this is a amazing! Please dont stop righting. You're to great to stop...and i will hurt anyone who disagrees:D
Rayne
Christine Paul (toolazytogoon) 2009-05-19 . chapter 1
beauutiiful(:
this is great, plot and all.
13tailed 2009-04-08 . chapter 1
OMG,

this story was 'Beautifully Cruel'. LOL, I'm glad I read it.
Lost In The Ever After 2009-03-26 . chapter 1
Oh, it was wonderful. I loved this piece, i really did. So happy they found happiness in each other. I wonder about William though. But I suppose he remained the faithful servant. Loved this piece.
Peace, Love, Laughter~
Lost~~
StoicCrying 2008-10-17 . chapter 1
the only thing I can type/say is:

awow

xD

FAVS
Shadow's Eve 2008-10-16 . chapter 1
Wow, this was very wonderful, and I liked it very much. It was sweet, and I wish you would write a story about Kakia and Rowan, a LONG story. Oh, and I LOVE the name Kakia. I don't know why, but I absolutely fell in love with that name. If I could, I would steal it from you. ;)
Now, for my complaints. Oh, the horror. Deal with it. I noticed you have a lot of punctuation issues going on. For a lot of the dialogue sentences you had, there would be no punctuation at the end of them, at all. I was wondering if this was just typos or you were unsure of what to put. Just to point that out, anyway. But I love this. It was very well written and I'm off to your profile to see what else you've written.
Merks 2008-10-12 . chapter 1
Holy damned friggin gracious. So unbelievably well written-! The descriptions, the plot, the characters, the wordings, the setting, the- MY GOOD GOD. I adore this. Wow. =]]

That was a very good -albeit long- read. lol
JtheChosen1 2008-10-06 . chapter 1
gawd that was hawt!
Daydream Nation 2008-09-25 . chapter 1
Ah. Amazing story. Powerplay ftw.
Roya7 2008-09-25 . chapter 1
WoW, Awsome ... :D

After some time I can find a fiction 100% to my liking! I love fantasy Yaois! *.* I can't find them anymore! :(

That was a great one shot! It was really long and very well written! I enjoyed every word of it! unlike other king/prince - slave/pet fictions, this time the slave was the dominant one! O.o that was a refresh! (If he was crueler I guess I adore him even more!) :D

The smex scene was great and what can I say more? :P

It was the first fic that I read from you and now I'm on it to read all of your works! @.@ Well the fantasy ones first! Any sugestion which one to read first? :)

Well, I just wanted to say THANK YOU, you make my day with your story! ^_^

Thanks...
alysia-moon 2008-09-24 . chapter 1
Wow... I like your story. It's nice to read one-shots. I like it much better than chasing after series of chapters by chapters. Very refreshing to read this fic.^^ I also can't wait to read the other chaptered fic you're currently doing. The one about the doctor... hehe. so UPDATE SOON k? :)
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