I found the sex scene...very very hot.
Eriunno, I find the concept of incest rather disturbing, but if it's not within your own family, it's terribly and sinfully arousing. XD
Only gay incest anyways, I had a thing for fathers and their sons.
IM MESSED UP I KNOW.

This is a very angsty but good story. I liked it. You had me crying.

Damn.

Wow. Ok, somehow managed to miss the Incest warning in the summary, and was, well, slightly shocked, to put it gently. Although that doesn't really do it for me, I like the story. You've done a great job channeling the raw emotion, and I certainly haven't read anything like this before. Can't wait to keep reading!

YAY! Sad begining angry middle happy ending. Very good lobed it five stars for you.

you kept switching Jake to joey confused the he'll out of me.

Um. I was fine with the dream while it was just Jake, but once Dad got involved...


I think Chris has his loves mixed up. So is Jake's. Dad is narcissistic; he keeps admiring a body that looks just like his.


They are totally unapologetic in their lusts. I think I can't help but be too judgmental to enjoy this story. As the daughter not abused, it hits way too close to home.


I can feel Chris's pain, and I wouldn't have forgiven them that quickly.

"Please Daddy, please."

I think I need a shower and I barely skimmed the last sex scene. I can tell that you weren't raised by a molester.


BTW, shouldn't the mother have been 28 when she died? And Jake becomes Joey when he tries to pick Chris up in chapter 1.

wow! that was good... Really good. awesome story

OMG *wipes at nosebleed* That was very, very, VERY AWESOME! Great job! I really enjoyed reading this! Thanks for posting!

Well, I like the plot so far. I just have a few problems. The writing for starters is a little too unbelievable...and the flow is a little hard to understand at times...that makes the story seem kind of awkward. There are definitely some grammar mistakes, but that's nothing that can't be fixed. :D But other than that, you have turned me into a fan of your story! Keep on writing, because you're doing a great job :)

Very interesting. And excellently written as well. The only criticism I have is that the dialogue is sometimes too formal to be realistic. If you made it less formal, the story would be perfect. Update soon!

This is good. Keep it up.