Wow! That is an great story! The idea is great, and the details really bring it to life. Plucking out the eyes, creepy and absolutely brilliant.

I only wish there was more! Her history is very intriguing.

Awesome story! ^_^ The monster woman thingo was a great idea, something that seems like either an evil spirit or some sort of 'imagination come to life' thing. ^_^ Great job!

Wow. I really liked the details you used. I could picture everything that happened. Good job.

Oh my God.

Crunchcrunchcrunch.

I sO hUnGrY, fAiTh.

I really, really liked this. Simple story that has all the necessary elements to induce fear: the vulnerability, the disbelief, the confrontation, the aftermath as the villian(ess) seeks other prey. You never explain much about the monster, why it's invisible to others, neither its tendency to cannibalism nor what it means to "play," and that's precisely why it raises the necessary question mark above the reader's head, the necessary dread.

All in all, an extraordinary grasp on what truly makes a story, and makes me gosh damn proud and privledged to have you as my reviewer.

26 years older than you are and I want to follow YOUR example!

Excellent story. I enjoyed it being short and sweet, but leaving room that it could be expanded into so much. We get little bits and pieces of the past that could be really exciting to explore. Good job and keep up the good work.