Twice it looks like you use ... and then a period. You should just use ... no period is needed.

I like you use of hyphens in the piece, but I think it's weird that you end it with a period since you only use ellipses to end sentences before. I do like your descriptions here, especially in the beginning, they are really beautiful. I also love hte phrase "anxiety-anticipation"

Ugh, man, you fail at subtlety.

Also, why do you feel the need to abbreviate "ing" words with apostrophes? It doesn't add ANYTHING to the poem. Maybe you think it improves your rhythm. In reality, the only thing it does is detract from minute traces of decent writing in the poem by making you look like a pompous **.

I enjoyed reading it, but of all flowers, why a dandelion?! dandelions are weeds...0.o

Wow, a really interesting one - looks as if you've been inspired of late :)
Liked the ending of this one, although it was a disappointed one.. your descriptions always draw me in.