Reviews for Gears of Deception

JaveHarron 2008-11-21 ch 5,	Good to see certain bastards get what's coming to them. Some of the transitions between characters were hard to see, but that's likely just a formatting issue. The grammar and writing was pretty good. Keep up the good work.
JaveHarron 2008-10-20 ch 4,	A very cool battle scene. The constructs and thaumaturgy was pretty cool, as were the Rangers. Looking forward to seeing the continuation of the battle.
JaveHarron 2008-10-15 ch 3,	You've done a good job setting the stage so far in this chapter. You have the sleazy ambassador, the Son of Auros, and lots of things going on at once. Keep up the awesome work.
Shoob 2008-10-13 ch 3,	Cool. It looks like you're building up to something, I look forward to finding out what.
JaveHarron 2008-10-06 ch 2,	Glad to see the newer awesome version of Michael. A few minor things: "Except of course, that it turns out he’d been studying cryo-alchemist since he was twelve." Should it be cryoalchemy? Or cryokinesis? "They are under my care, and I will do whatever I deem necessary to ensure they have the moral and conditioning they need to do their jobs.” Should be "morale." Other than this, I'm liking the political aspects of GoD so far.
Shoob 2008-09-28 ch 1,	Nice start. Can't wait for more.
JaveHarron 2008-09-24 ch 1,	Off to an awesome start, CB. It opened with a bang, but a lot of descriptive narration. Hoping to see some more action soon!