 Icyfire4w5 2009-11-01 . chapter 11) "My hands moved with a life of their;"
(Um, I might be wrong, but I assume that you've intended to type "their own".)
2) I think that you've chosen the perfect POV for this story. (1st person POV=Heightened horror)
3) Emily is so young, yet so cunning. Argh, her life has ended too soon. |