 Isca 2009-06-06 . chapter 1I must say, the imagery in the first stanza is absolutely stunning--mentioning morning glories, in particular, was a nice touch.
"They say she was born with starlight in her eyes." Ah, yes, a great soul she must be--how beautiful. |
 rippinghouse 2008-10-07 . chapter 1little details i like: cobblestones, "frost falling from the bluebells", cabbage whites.
i always love the imagery in your poems (more specifically the colors, they paint the most wonderful pictures in my head),
it is what makes them great. |