Whooa this is so god! :D :D
I love how the way you write, you can make it seem so alive and real, like just the little details and stuff. the storyline is getting so great! and your characters ahve so much personality. :)
I only have one complaint, and that's that the plots a little complicated and i'd appreciate it if you clarified a bit more to dull readers like me. :P
I can't wait for more!
ps. those themes are so perfect. :)

Two words: I'm hooked.
I'm anxious to find out more.