that was awesomely beautiful. the interaction between the two characters were done especially well. And the end was practically the definition of bittersweet. lovely job there! :)

generally i don't like the whole 'angst' thing, except for a few select stories that are written really, really, really well; this is one of those few.

yes. feel special.

Aw... this is actually pretty sweet. You did well with this story...
The last lines will always stick in my mind, and actually, I thought of a quote my friend told me that she found somewhere that goes, "In the end, everything will be okay. If it's not okay, it's not the end."

Hah hah, I'm reviewing your shortest story because it's almost one in the morning and I'm lazy. But I love a lot of your wordchoice; you really paint an interesting picture :) But there's nothing wrong with angst. Even though it seems to be a foreign word to my own writing...

That was beautiful and nearly made me cry O_O I love the names... But seriously, that was gorgeous. And so bittersweet! The style...and everything! Goodness.

I...I'm gonna go cry now. So beautifully dark.

I love it!


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That was beautiful! Lots of angst but i still loved it. Little mute kids called Eden are the best. :)

Sad. This was really sad.
I loved the WTF kiss. Very sweet.

This really was a good one-shot. I liked it very muchly.

well done!
xoxo

You know even though it appears Eden is at fault for injuring Bailey I feel bad for him. They're both suffering...even though I'd be interested to see what happens in their lives I think this works well as a one shot.

Great one-shot for Freak-of-Spade. Kinda angsty but it's still really well written. ^^

I love this.
I LOVE this.
No, i mean it. I seriously love this. I love how beautifully it's written, i love how poetic your use of language is, i love how skillfully you're painted characters in such a short piece of writing (it takes me chapters and chapters to develope MY characters >_

An interesting short little piece! i'm starting to read through more and more entries since I found the c2 and It's so fascinating to see how different each one is! I actually really quite like the characterisation of Beth...I found her intriguing. You have some gorgeous descriptions! great piece!

So this was very pretty. I loved. You did an A+ job fitting in the requirements without making them obvious ata ll.

I like the name Eden. I like cute little mute kids and/with their stepbrother. I liked the "Eden drive slower" paragraph and I don't really know why. I guess it was neato to get more of the background story.

And I also teared up at the end, as you may recall from last night.

Love it. Jealous of you.

My story about a mute kid is better than your story about a mute kid. Just kidding. While you're obviously a writer, I obviously have never written anything ever. Haha.
I really really liked it. I'm adding it to my favs. I don't really know what to say, except that it was really good.
Good luck. :)