Holy buckets! *laughs* That was just SO enjoyable! That Damien character is a riot. I LOVED the bit about the frilly tutu and killing with fluff. These are great characters and you did a good job working in the challenge stuff. Nothing really felt forced or out of place or there ‘because it was part of the challenge’; you know?

So that’s the good stuff. I noticed a couple of word choice oopses; both very common. The first was when they were talking backstage. Ian said ‘loose virginity’ in reference to why Josh jilted Aiden. The correct word is ‘lose’. ‘Loose’ refers to something that is not tight or something freed. The second was shortly after, during the discussion of Georgette’s first time ‘on summer brake’. You wanted ‘break’. ‘Brake’ is the term for a device that stops or slows a moving object, while ‘break’ indicates something broken (such as the continuity of work or school, resulting in a vacation). Those were the only two things that jumped out at me. Except those two little things, this was enjoyable and very funny. Cheers!

i like!
its really cute!

Hey,
this is really cute.
You should make this into a story.
I'd love to read more.
It seems like such an odd couple but it works.
:)

(took me ages, I know, but I'm finally going through the entries I didn't review and reviewing them) (reviewing it AGAIN when it comes to YOUR entry >_< I SWEAR I feel like I already wrote a review for this) (actually, now that I think about it, I think I read this entry with my friend Daniel, and then we TALKED about it, and then later I thought I'd already reviewed it but in fact I'd only just TALKED about it with Danykins) (but I'm not sure) (but anyway)

It was a really really good entry. Reading it and realising that because of my stupidity I didn't get you to enter the other challenges kind of makes me realise my loss. Although Aiden's character isn't as developed as I wish it'd been (but that's mainly because it's a oneshot and I have this thing were I always wish oneshots were longer or had more chapters) but Damien is adorable, and the ending was so fluffy and feel-good you just felt like snuggling into it. Josh is an utter bee ay ess tee ay are dee, and I LOVED the bit where Damien talks to him. I was all 'HECK YEAH, TAKE THAT BIOTCH!!' >:D anyone who could dump their boyfriend/girlfriend for refusing to have sex with them is just...despicable. HOPE YOU GET AIDS AND DIE, JOSH!!
No, no, I don't hate him that bad, really.
It was also really well-written and funny and fluffy and all the things I love in a fic.
I'm SO SO SO SO SO sorry I never reviewed this before. I feel SO bad. I hope one day you'll find it in your heart to forgive me :( although it was completely my fault. Trust me. And you're not the only one it happened too. I guess I shouldn't have organized this challenge, I'm too disorganized :S
Anyway, (VERY LATE) thanks for the entry and A THOUSAND TIMES SORRY.

nice fic, cute.fluffy.funny.

good work.

Hilarious, cute, and nicely written! 4 stars!

This is awesome
I really like it =D