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Blue Dwarf
Nemonus
2009-01-17 . chapter 1
"molecular fingertips" and "a whitish dwarf...licking the black slate clean" are really cool images. Of course I love the scientific undertones. You've got pretty nice word choice too.
Eshana the Searcher
2008-09-30 . chapter 1
I really liked this.
Loved the imagery and flow.
Nicely done.
~Eshana
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