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Reviews For: Bittersweet Emptiness

Freddy Teddy
2008-09-26
ch 1,
That was really cute! But, do you think you can write more...like how he comes back? That would be nice.
Couture.Kisses
2008-09-26
ch 1,
hahah well drinking dr. pepper sure did you wonders didn't it? i dont drink soda sadly, gives me way too much acne. Ick.

anyways, wow this was amazing! so unique, so original, it wasn't the same old recycled vampire stories that i am so sick of seeing, and not only that this was also very well-written too!!

I really enjoyed it. Edgar Holloway sure sounded yummy :P
and I LOVE DARK CHOCOLATE. haha.
Happy writing! ^-^
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