Really really cute. Makes me love halloween :D

how long does it usually take for you to do this? oh btw, its really cute=3

You should have put a ending, like they end up together because that would have been cuter.

But eevn withough it, it was really really really really really really really really cute, i wish that i had thought about something like this,


I especcially like the part about when he says that he wants something else and she is like, what and he kisses her. THAT IS SO CUTE!

More!!

So cute...*sigh* I love Brandon. :)

sweet.

Cute. :] And since yesterday was Halloween, great timing for me to be reading this. x3 loveloveloved it. Adorable! :D

Aww, this is a cute one-shot. No, really. But so cliche. Though I have to admit, I thought it would turn out differently. Still.

Aw cute. And awesome Halloween story. (: Spifftastic writing, plot, characters (Jake rocks!), and of course, romance. (: Cliche yes, but it's also a super spiffy oneshot. (: Props to artistic dreamer for adding this to our c2. (:

This story was so cute! You're a great writer. :]

I'm glad I decided to check out your profile; your stories are wonderful. They're short though -- I'm sure it wouldn't be too hard to extend them. The characters could handle it, I think.

Keep writing!

aw how cute! =)

Cute :)
Great job!
-Aria

yesyesyesyes.
why can't everyone's halloween be like this one?
i love love love this story.

xof♥

cute chapter. loved it :D