 R.E.D. the animator 2008-11-17 . chapter 1 WOW... I mean WOW! I really want to do that as a play sometime XD finish it so i can w/ people! |
 deep-purple-frost 2008-11-17 . chapter 1 Wow! i mean WOW! i loved it! Plz Update It! i really want to find out how it ends! "I will be taking care of u until u can be on ur own" "Ok" XD i like how it dosent phase them at all XD |
 Wheezy Giggle 2008-11-16 . chapter 2Hey, I think that this is the right story...- (wait are you the one who left a review for my pirate story?) Well anyways... This is hilarious! I am in love with this book. You have introduced the character's personalitysreally well and i love your sense of humor! I can't wait till you update so keep me posted alright?
Wheezy Giggle :D |
 Erich Dieziger 2008-11-13 . chapter 1 It was i who wrote it! Erich Dieziger! i also am the leader of a religion, and a political party founder... now allow to tell you about the Erichist religion-Erichism-now it is very simple to fallow... all you need is the 5 pillars of erich
1)you will ackoledge that their is a man named Erich D. Dieziger
2)Theyre no Gods in Erichism
3)if you join the religion and then quit... you will be sacraficed to the gods that dont excist!
4)If you join u must convert 5 ppl within the next week...cause thats how i role
5)Say "pink" before u ever ride an airplane! i guarentee u will never crash! of course their is other parts of erichism and they r stored in my brain! u r welcome!
Now for the erichist party!
Abortion: i have a simple solution to this! just stop ppl from having sex! especially fat people! its not cosher! just find the hotest ppl in the US and alow them to mate at the age of 20... see! abortion problem solved! next issue
Stem cell research: Really? are u ppl out their so lonly that you need to create clones of urself? get a grip and get out of the house... meet real ppl! i know u r reading this know and do u know what you could be doing instead? you could be meeting real ppl!I will continue this in next coment |
 sara 2008-11-13 . chapter 1 i thouroughly enjoyed this story... who wrote it? he is a god! |
 bozo the plumber 2008-11-13 . chapter 1 XD XD XD XD perfect! 6 out of 5 stars! |
 Will Smith 2008-11-13 . chapter 1 I HATED IT!! U SUCK! U DESERVE TO DIE! DIE AND GO TO HELL! AND NOT THE COOL PART OF HELL WITH THE RAPESTS AND MURDERS BUT THE REALLY SHITY PART OF HELL WITH THE REALLY BAD ACCOUNTENTS! I THINK I AM ACTUALLY DUMBER FOR READING THIS! thanks for the laugh... |
 Will Smith 2008-11-13 . chapter 2 THIS STORY SUCKED! i cant belive i actually wasted 5 min of my life reading this! I think i am actually dumber than when i started reading it! DIE! DIE AND GO TO HELL! AND NOT THE COOL PART OF HELL WITH ALL THE RAPESTS AND MURDERS BUT THE REALLY HORRIBLE PART OF HELL WITH THE REALLY BAD ACCOUNTENTS! thanks for the laugh... |
 just call me god... 2008-11-13 . chapter 2 I LOVED IT! IT CHANGED MY LIFE! PLEASE WRITE MORE BECAUSE YOUR STORY INSPIRED ME TO REACH FOR THE STARS! PLZ PUT ON THE OTHER CHAPTERS BECAUSE I MUST KNOW HOW IT ENDS! |
 Yamithevampire 2008-11-13 . chapter 2...Ok...so let me get this straight...people can die more than once and the spirit stays on earth while the body vanishes...ok... I missed something in theology class. Also I don't belief that a drake is a wolf if he's summoning a wolf than it's a dyslexic drake that thought it was being summoned...an extremely dyslexic drake...or maybe it's just deaf. |
 Yamithevampire 2008-10-01 . chapter 1XD this is impossible to read seriously!!
Like honestly "I am Z from the Mystic Island." "Oh." WHAT!?!?! |