hA hA. This is creative and hilariuos. I love it! keep it up, I like the way you describe things. You have a way with words!

Beautiful writing and a sweet story! It's too bad it's a oneshot, I'd love to see where the story went.

OMG! Your writing is so beautiful and full of meaning :)

You've described the situation really well ... keep up the great work ...

But please do continue, it seems like a lovely story to elaborate on.

P.S I was wondering if you could review my new story as well. I am kinda new here, so I would love your feedback and appreciate it if you review. Thanks. Bye!