Wow, that's quite dark. BUt it's amazing, I must say. The story flows beautifully, you're a great author. :)

Wow, this was so bloody and... wonderful. It was written so seamlessly. I really thought that it was an ominous kind of beautiful.

This is very powerful. Very well written as well. I see where the main character is coming from though.

I know so many people that would find this offensive; those are people who don't KNOW. I've dealt my whole life understanding completely what's going on through this young woman's mind. I don't condone murder, but sometimes, when it's very late, and I can't control the old memories, I understand it. Very powerful, cringe-worthy, short story.

That was pretty dark. Anguish much? Nice throwback to the classic Israeli hand-cannon. I work with someone that might actually do something like this; I've been reviewing the locations of the emergency exits lately. Anyway, I noted some technical things, so I'll msg those to you. Nice work; keep writing.

Whoa. o.0 Creepy but well written. Nice job.

~Unknown Survivor~