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Karl Olen 2008-09-27 . chapter 1
Sad. I liked the heartfelt nature and how true it all felt.
BUT, please revise it a little because I'm fairly certain you didn't mean to say "I keep you smiles in my pocket," On the first line, just add the 'r' and people will take your writing that much more seriously. I make those sort of mistakes all the time.
Jo 2008-09-27 . chapter 1
malas wanna log-in :)

nice... i like. it's so simple and honest
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