OH MY GOD!
It's an INSTANT FAVOURITE! :D

The imagery of the person twirling to the music, was so beautiful!

The ending was so powerful, so vivid, so tragic, that I just couldn't review this fast enough :P

BRAVO! :D

Nicely done. (:

~Unknown Survivor~

I like this. It's exactly the right length, and the word choice is unique enough to make it stand out. The only change I can think of is to add a comma after "for" in the third line.

Great use of italics and parentheses.